The Ticket
by Debra Coleman Jeter
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GENRE: YA Suspense
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BLURB:
The Ticket
She hoped winning the
lottery would solve her problems.
Her problems have just
begun....
It is 1975, an ordinary
year for an ordinary Southern family. TRAY DUNAWAY, like thousands of other
teenagers around the country, longs to be part of the popular set at school.
Tray’s mother, EVELYN, lies in bed most days with a headache, and her bipolar
tendency toward extreme highs or desperate lows veers more and more often
toward depression. Tray’s grandmother GINNY, who lives with the family, still
grieves the loss of her husband, Brook. She believes it’s time for her to move
out, if she could afford to, and find a place of her own, maybe even a new romance.
This doesn’t look likely, given the state of the family’s finances.
Then something
extraordinary happens. A down-and-out friend of the family, PEE WEE JOHNSON,
buys an extra lottery ticket. He gives it to Tray’s dad as a thank-you for
driving Pee Wee to Hazard, Illinois ,
where he purchased the tickets. And what do you know?
When Johnson demands his
cut, Tray’s dad refuses. As Evelyn’s illness spirals toward madness, Johnson
turns threatening, and Tray makes some poor decisions, what initially seems like
a stroke of good fortune suddenly triggers a disturbing chain of events.
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EXCERPTS:
“What are you talking about, Pee Wee?”
Something in Dad’s voice, an undercurrent of excitement,
catches my attention. I listen closely, even as I draw out bologna, cheese,
mustard, and mayo, and balance them gingerly while I push the refrigerator door
shut with my foot. Dad can’t stand it if you leave the door open a second
longer than you have to. Wastes electricity.
I decide to fry the bologna since I know he likes it that
way. I put the skillet on the eye of the stove and drop just the least little
dab of bacon grease into it. There’s always a crock of bacon and sausage grease
next to the oven to use for seasoning beans and keeping stuff from sticking to
the skillet, like when you’re frying potatoes. I don’t much like the smell of
grease myself, but it does make things taste better and cook more smoothly.
“Slow down, Pee Wee, and tell it to me outright, straight
and simple.” Dad’s body is motionless, and I can tell he’s hanging on every
word being said on the other end. “How much?” he asks, in a funny choked sort
of voice. Then, after a pause, “Are you sure? Let me write down the details.
Hold on a sec.”
Dad fumbles with the phone, his eyes darting around until
they meet mine. Despite the thinning hair, he is still a good-looking man, with
his lean body, chiseled jawline, and bottle-green eyes. For a second, I can see
him darting around the tennis court, making unbelievable shots you’d never
expect him to reach. The bologna is spattering flecks of grease in my direction
now, so I turn down the heat and take the bologna up before it can burn.
Pretending not to have been listening, I resume the
sandwich-making process. Mustard on one side, mayonnaise on the other, bologna,
and thin slices of cheese, the way he likes it. I decide to spread a little
peanut butter on the meat, being careful not to burn my fingers.
But, out of the corner of my eye, I watch Dad. Frantically,
he jerks open a drawer, locates a pen and a scrap of paper, and returns to his
conversation. He writes carefully, eyebrows still drawn together in a single
line. “I don’t know about that,” he says, the undercurrent of excitement more
intense now, though his tone remains even and controlled. “We’ll see. We’ll
have to see.”
Pen and paper in hand, he places the receiver gently in its
cradle and looks at me. The expression in his eyes tells me he’s in no mood for
my tennis tale. So I ask, “What did Pee Wee have to say?”
“He says—he says I’ve won the lottery.”
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AUTHOR Bio and Links:
The Ticket is Debra Coleman Jeter’s first novel. It was a finalist for a
Selah Award in two categories: Young Adult Fiction and First Novel. A
Vanderbilt University professor, Debra Coleman Jeter has published fiction and
nonfiction in popular magazines, including Working Woman, New Woman, Self, Home
Life, Savvy, Christian Woman, and American Baby. Her story, “Recovery,” won
first prize in a Christian Woman short story competition, and her nonfiction
book “Pshaw, It’s Me Grandson”: Tales of a Young Actor was a finalist in the
2007 USA Book News Awards. She is a co-writer of the screenplay for Jess +
Moss, a feature film which premiered in 2011 at the Sundance Film Festival,
screened at nearly forty film festivals around the world, and captured several
international awards. She lives in Clarksville ,
Tennessee , with her husband.
Website and Blog:
www.debracolemanjeter.com
Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/debra.c.jeter
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/DebColemanJeter
The Amazon page:
http://www.amazon.com/dp/1941103863/
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/dashboard
The trailer:
https://vimeo.com/50187275
Here's a link to the trailer on YouTube: https://youtu.be/FYTKJdd7Gqw
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GIVEAWAY INFORMATION and RAFFLECOPTER CODE
Debra will be awarding a $10 Amazon or B/N GC to a
randomly drawn winner via rafflecopter during the tour
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RispondiEliminaThanks Rita. So glad you liked it! This is one of my favorite passages. Don't forget to view the trailer.
EliminaGreat post - thanks for sharing :)
RispondiEliminaThanks for commenting Victoria. I'm glad you enjoyed the post. Don't forget to view the trailer.
EliminaThanks for hosting!
RispondiEliminaCongrats on the tour and thanks for the chance to win :)
RispondiEliminaThank you Lisa. Glad to have you on board. Don't forget to view the trailer.
EliminaThanks, Mave, for hosting an excerpt from The Ticket on your website today. Also, my thanks to everyone who reads, comments, or poses questions. Don’t forget to click and view the trailer. I really appreciate every comment I get!
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